[Suggestion] My Idea for Story Mode

[Mish7913]

Few days ago I was having fun with my siblings about idea for STK story, and after that I took my stylus, and start to draw this ideas, and I made small animatics, so ... enjoy watching.   Well ... if it's not what STK need, at least I have fun drawing this, and also it maybe gives to someone ideas for real STK story.

P/S: Watch with SOUND ON (I voiced).

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IDEA 1: 

[Mish7913]

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IDEA 2: 

[Mish7913]

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IDEA 3: 

[C4mil011]

See this: https://forum.supertuxkart.net/thread-362.html

The animation and the dialogue were fairly cool, but the ideas themselves are, well, not that original. You already admitted that the first 2 ones are inspired by ST and STK respectively, and the third one also seems a little if not staight out too straightforward.

They're for sure not terrible, but my vision for the plot is more complex than that. Regardless of how it ends up, it shouldn't try to appeal to everyone unless we wanna make it appeal no one.

I challenge you to make an Idea #4 inspired by my story as well, maybe it ends up better than I expected. As a side note, my plot outline draft is already done, but it's currently only visible for me and Alayan. I also mentally fleshed out the personalities for a few more characters.

Since STKE is aiming at a much higher quality in pretty much everywhere, the Story Mode plot shouldn't be an afterthought either, and, in my opinion, someone serious about it should write it. Obviously that doesn't have to be me, but I'm really happy and very willing to help, but I have to admit I came here for the Story specifically, and not jusy to contribute.

Anyways, here's my catchphrase:

[Mish7913]

Hi C4mil011. 
I appreciate your feedback, but how I see you took my stories seriously, actually I did that animatics more like a joke stories (not as contribution), I just did that for fun (because I was laughing with my siblings about that ideas, and I just share with y'all, so you can laugh with me). 

And also if you challenging me to make Idea #4 (based on your story), I have a few questions according your story, so ...I read your story, but I don't understand some things:

1. Where is Nolok?
   
2. Why is Mr. Iceblock in the main story?
   
3. You using the same idea: Where Nolok kidnapping GNU or not?
   

[C4mil011]

Hello back,

As joke stories, they're actually nice (even if they're not 100% original), and I really liked the "lunch" joke.

Well, the exact events of my Act I aren't locked down yet, and I might especially change the location of it. Still, feel free to do the Idea #4 if you still want to, and don't force yourself to use the exact lines I wrote. It's currently more of a proof of concept until we seriously start working on the cutscenes. Even if the first 3 ideas kinda failed at originality, they were very well executed.

Also clarifications:
1. We dunno. Seriously. The characters don't even know it's Nolok the one who kidnapped Gnu.
2. Since it's confirmed that he'll make it into Evolution, I thought: "Why not add him too?". Anyways, I can replace him with someone else in that exact scene, but that'd mean modifying the dialogue as well.
3. Well yes, but actually no. It's used more as background noise rather than the main point of the plot. I decided focusing more on the tension in between Tux and Pidgin, even if it's not as straightforward.

[Mish7913]

Okay, thanks for answer.

Well ... To be honest I don't have any ideas right now based on your story, if I will have one - maybe I will make it Idea #4.

[Mish7913]

I challenge you to make an Idea #4 inspired by my story as well

Hi, i did it, Idea #4 based on your story.
Of course, I didn't copy your story, I changed a lot of stuff, I only made "based" on your story.