14-07-2026, 01:19 PM
Hello back,
As joke stories, they're actually nice (even if they're not 100% original), and I really liked the "lunch" joke.
Well, the exact events of my Act I aren't locked down yet, and I might especially change the location of it. Still, feel free to do the Idea #4 if you still want to, and don't force yourself to use the exact lines I wrote. It's currently more of a proof of concept until we seriously start working on the cutscenes. Even if the first 3 ideas kinda failed at originality, they were very well executed.
Also clarifications:
1. We dunno. Seriously. The characters don't even know it's Nolok the one who kidnapped Gnu.
2. Since it's confirmed that he'll make it into Evolution, I thought: "Why not add him too?". Anyways, I can replace him with someone else in that exact scene, but that'd mean modifying the dialogue as well.
3. Well yes, but actually no. It's used more as background noise rather than the main point of the plot. I decided focusing more on the tension in between Tux and Pidgin, even if it's not as straightforward.
As joke stories, they're actually nice (even if they're not 100% original), and I really liked the "lunch" joke.
Well, the exact events of my Act I aren't locked down yet, and I might especially change the location of it. Still, feel free to do the Idea #4 if you still want to, and don't force yourself to use the exact lines I wrote. It's currently more of a proof of concept until we seriously start working on the cutscenes. Even if the first 3 ideas kinda failed at originality, they were very well executed.
Also clarifications:
1. We dunno. Seriously. The characters don't even know it's Nolok the one who kidnapped Gnu.
2. Since it's confirmed that he'll make it into Evolution, I thought: "Why not add him too?". Anyways, I can replace him with someone else in that exact scene, but that'd mean modifying the dialogue as well.
3. Well yes, but actually no. It's used more as background noise rather than the main point of the plot. I decided focusing more on the tension in between Tux and Pidgin, even if it's not as straightforward.
Kawa kawa kevasak, kawa kawa qua-qua-quack!
